Saturday, October 28, 2006

The Magical Bunny Rabbit (Part One)

Unedited, written by 9 year old new writer

Once there was a girl called Rebecca who brought a rabbit called Starsky but she did not know that the rabbit had magical powers.

One night she came downstairs for a drink of water and she looked into the rabbit cage to see if the rabbit was alright so she looked into Starsky’s bowl to see if he had any food.

“That was funny” said Rebecca “I fed Starsky before I went up to bed”

so Rebecca went to get the rabbit food but when she went back to the rabbit hutch again but when Rebecca got there the bowl was completely full to the ridge of the bowl when it was all gone. Rebecca thought and thought until she said to herself maybe Starsky had magical powers.

Then Rebecca said "no it can’t be true I must be dreaming" so Rebecca went back upstairs to go to sleep.

When she got into bed it made a big creak on the top bunk so when Starsky heard the noise of the bed he unlocked the cage at night and rang all of his rabbit friends to come round and have a party at the driver family’s house and there was a really good game that the rabbits played most was called bouncing bunny’s it’s like jumping and you have to reach food from the cupboard like Doritos with salsa or crisps and what a rabbit likes sweets and chocolate.

That night Daniella heard the music that the rabbits were making. Just then Starsky’s best friend Patchy had a feeling that someone was coming down the stairs so all of the rabbits jumped out of the window and Starsky got back into his hutch as fast as he could but when Daniella got of the last step Starsky was faster than Daniella going down the stairs so Daniella called Rebecca from upstairs.

"Why are you calling me downstairs at one o clock in the morning?"

Then Daniella showed Rebecca what the matter was - the whole living room was full of carrots and all sorts of rabbit food on the floor.

Rebecca said "I will tidy all of the mess up on the floor until there is not even a little bit of dust."

When Rebecca went into the kitchen to get the dust pan and brush and when Rebecca got back to clean up the mess it was all gone!

Then Rebecca said to Starsky, "did you just clean all that up while I was in the kitchen?"

Then you won’t believe what happened Starsky actually spoke to Rebecca. That very moment Rebecca felt quite scared to be in a room with a talking rabbit. But she could not be afraid of her own rabbit and that she was bigger than Starsky so Rebecca sat down on the sofa and was talking to Starsky at last.

Copyright: RND, 2006

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